quelques commentaires

bonjour à tous,
heureuse de voir quelqu'un réagir par rapport aux fautes d'expression incluses dans les textes "originaux" en langue arabe. Je crois savoir que ce n'est pas l'un de mes étudiants sinon il n'aurait pas commenté cela sur le blog vu que cela a déjà été fait en cours. Je tient à préciser qu'il incombe au traducteur de toujours vérifier son document et repérer les anomalies. La responsabilité du client concerne la fourniture d'un document source linguistiquement et techniquement adéquat et correct. Donc, ce que nous essayons de faire en classe est un travail de traducteur et un travail de rewriter puisque nous traduisons pour l'autre qui est censé ne pas connaître la langue de départ; de corriger les fautes et de combler les lacunes pour qu'à la fin notre résultat soit à la fois "fidèle" au message mais, aussi, fonctionnellement "correcte", parce qu'en définitive, notre tâche est de servir des clients de plus en plus exigeants.

marche à suivre

Bonjour à tous,
Visiblement tout le monde n'arrive pas à s'adapter à l'outil informatique. Ce n'est pas grave et il n'est jamais trop tard pour apprendre. Alors pour ceux qui ne savent pas comment faire, vous avez plusieurs possibilités:
-Soit vous envoyez vos travaux sur ma mail box: benaoudaa@gmail.com en pièce jointe (Word, PDF, RTF...);
-Soit vous rédigez directement sur la page de votre mail box et vous l'envoyez comme si vous écriviez un message normal;
-Soit vous vous faites aider par un gars du cyber ou un(e) copain(e) qui sache déjà utiliser cette forme de communication.
Mais il ya une chose à ne pas oublier, c'est de mentionner votre nom complet ainsi que votre groupe et l'année.

BONNE ANNÉE

Bonne Année à toute la terre
À ceux que je ne connais pas
Que chacun puisse vivre et marcher à son pas
Libre de s’exprimer et aussi de se taire.

Bonne Année aux uns et aux autres
À ceux qui sont restés, à ceux qui sont partis
Aux jeunes et aux vieux, aux grands et aux petits
Même si leurs soucis sont loin d’être les nôtres.

A mes étudiants:
Je vous souhaite une bonne et heureuse année 2009 remplie de bonheur, de bonnes choses et de nouveautés dans vos vies. Souhaitez de bons voeux à tous vos amis (et vos ennemis) et prenez de bonnes résolutions pour l’année 2009.

Pour enrichir mes voeux, je vous propose ces citations:

N'attends pas que les événements arrivent comme tu le souhaites. Décide de vouloir ce qui arrive... et tu seras heureux.
[Epictète]

La gaieté, la santé changent l'hiver en été.
[Antoine Désaugiers]. Extrait de Le Dîner de Madelon

bonjour,
vous devez impérativement rendre vos travaux via mon adresse mail: benaoudaa@gmail.com avant le 31 décembre minuit, sinon ce sera trop tard!
bon courage.

remise des travaux

bonjour tout le monde.
je sais que vous êtes en vacances, je vous conseille de bien en profiter; mais n'oubliez pas que vous avez jusqu'au 31 décembre minuit pour remettre vos travaux.

travaux à accomplir durant les vacances d'hiver

Certificat d’hérédité (1)

A. B., notaire du canton de Berne avec Etude à Corgémont, certifie:
1. Monsieur Werner Wymann, 1919, de Liesberg, maître boucher, Haut du Village 17, 2607 Cortébert, est décédé le 20 novembre 1984.
2. Sont reconnus comme seuls héritiers du défunt:(2)
a. son épouse, Berthe Wymann née Türler, 1925, de Liesberg, ménagère, Haut du Village 17, 2607 Cortébert;
b. son fils, Maurice Wymann, 1948, de Liesberg, commerçant, chemin des Cerisiers 3, 2740 Moutier.
3. Le carnet d’épargne no 317.414.7 de la Banque cantonale de Berne fait partie de la succession. Par acte de partage du 17 juin 1985, ce carnet d’épargne a été attribué en toute propriété à Madame Berthe Wymann née Türler. Elle a le droit d’en disposer
librement.(3)
4. Le présent certificat d’hérédité est établi sur requête des héritiers (4) et annexé au carnet d’épargne susmentionné.1)
Authentifié en l’Etude du notaire le vingt août mil neuf cent quatre-
vingt-cinq.
20 août 1985

Remarques
1) Le certificat d’hérédité (pour papiers-valeurs) est un acte de constatation du notaire dont la minute destinée à servir de moyen de preuve est remise aux personnes concernées (inscription dans le répertoire «B» du notaire, voir art. 12 ON).
En revanche, le certificat d’hérédité est un acte de constatation dont la minute reste sous la garde du notaire (inscription dans le répertoire «A» du notaire, voir art. 12 al. 2 ON). Des expéditions sont établies à titre de pièces justificatives (p.ex. pour le registre foncier).
2) Concernant «la reconnaissance» des héritiers voir Pfäffli dans NB 1985, p. 73.
3) Pour les papiers à ordre (par exemple pour les cédules hypothécaires nominatives et les actions nominatives), l’endossement en faveur de l’acquéreur doit être signé par les héritiers ou un mandataire.
4) Art. 20 al. 1 DN.
5) Le présent modèle d’acte notarié a été volontairement rédigé de façon sommaire. Ceci ne dispense pas le notaire de son devoir d’examen (actes de famille, ouverture des testaments, pactes successoraux, répudiation de la succession,
etc.).
– Remplace le formulaire no 8.2.A du Recueil des formulaires de 1961.

homework for winter hollidays

DIVORCE AGREEMENT

HUSBAND NAME, referred to herein as HUSBAND and WIFE NAME, referred to as WIFE, agree:
The parties were lawfully married on @100 at |101. Difficulties have occurred between the parties, and they have agreed to live separate and apart. The parties nevertheless desire to resolve certain issues and consequently, have entered into this agreement.

The parties have 2 children born of this marriage, named:
CHILDRENS NAMES
born, DATES OF BIRTH OF CHILDREN, respectively.

The parties have made a complete disclosure to one another of financial matters and each is satisfied that they have had sufficient disclosure of the parties individual and joint finances.

The parties have each been advised by advisors of their own choice regarding their legal rights and any disclosures made herein.

The husband shall assume the following debts, and hold the wife harmless from the same:
DEBTS ASSUMED BY HUSBAND

The wife shall assume the following debts, and hold the husband harmless from the same:
DEBST ASSUMED BY WIFE

Neither party shall incur any further debts which may result in joint liability. In the event that either party incurs a debt on joint credit of the parties, they shall be responsible for the same.

As child support, HUSBAND shall pay support weekly the sum of $ 75 (seventy five dollars).

The HUSBAND shall maintain health insurance for the benefit of NAMES FOR WHOM THE INSURANCE WILL BE MAINTAINED.

Personal property of the parties shall be divided as follows:
The HUSBAND shall have the following property:
PROPERTY DISTRIBUTED BY HUSBAND

The WIFE shall have the following property:
PROPERTY DISTRIBUTED BY WIFE

If any debts are associated with the items of property divided herein, the party receiving the same shall assume the debt and hold the other party harmless from such debts. Any property not specifically divided herein shall be subject to distribution at a later time.

The WIFE shall have temporary possession of the residence owned by the parties located at PROPERTY ADDRESS. Expenses related to the residence shall be borne by the parties as follows:
Husband: PERCENTAGE OF EXPENSE TO BE PAID BY HUSBAND per cent
Wife: PERCENTAGE OF PROPERTY EXPENSE TO BE PAID BY WIFE per cent

The parties agree that this agreement is intended to be a final disposition of the matters agreed upon herein. This agreement may be introduced into evidence and incorporated in a final decree of dissolution of marriage. In the event that any disputes occur regarding this agreement the prevailing party shall be entitled to reasonable counsel fees regarding
such enforcement.

THIS IS A LEGALLY ENFORCEABLE AGREEMENT. READ CAREFULLY AND OBTAIN LEGAL ADVICE BEFORE EXECUTING THIS AGREEMENT.

Dated: _________________________________________
_______________________________________________
HUSBAND NAME, HUSBAND
_______________________________________________
WIFE NAME, WIFE
Witnesses as to HUSBAND:
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
Witnesses as to WIFE:
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________

عمل اثناء العطلة الشتائية لأقسام السنة الأولى عربي/انجليزي

عقد عمل

هذا هو عقد العمل المبرم بين :

أ. صاحب العمل :

ب الموظف : السيد / السيدة / الانسه………………………………………………..

حامل بطاقة التعريف الوطنية ………………………………………………………

وكلاهما يلزم نفسه بالاحكام والشروط التالية : --
1. الوظيفة أو المنصب :
2. مكان العمل :...... لن يكون الموظف مطلوبا للعمل في أي بلد آخر.
3. الراتب الشهري الاساسي :
4. مدة العقد : سنتين
5. ايام العمل وساعات العمل : 6 ايام في الاسبوع و 8 ساعات في اليوم
6. مزايا الاجازة : 30 يوما في السنة
7. العلاج الطبي : على صاحب العمل توفير الضمان الاجتماعي.
8. التأمين : على صاحب العمل توفير ما يلزم من التأمين ضد الوفاه او الاصابة وفقا لقوانين عمل البلد.
9. تجديد العقد : يمكن تجديد العقد بعد انتهاء مدة العقد
10. الاحكام والشروط الاخرى : الاحكام والشروط الاخرى في صالح الموظف غير المشموله هنا التي تنص عليها قوانين عمل البلد وتطبق و تكون جزءا من العقد.
11. الشهاده : على رب العمل والموظف ان يشهدا بأن لديهما قراءة وفهما كاملا لهذا الاتفاق وكذلك ان يشهدا بأنهما فهما فهما تاما و أنهما سيطبقان كل هذه الشروط والبنود جنبا الى جنب و أي اجراء خارج عن هذا العقد يعتبر لاغيا و باطلا.

واثباتا فيها، قد وقعت الاطراف هنا …… ….. اليوم………………….… 2008

التوقيع نيابة عن رب العمل توقيع الموظف
اطبع الاسم : اطبع الاسم :


المكان :

ختم الشركة / الختم :

عمل اثناء العطلة الشتائية لأقسام السنة الثانية عربي/انجليزي

نموذج عقد بيع شقة سكنية

إنه فى يوم ……….الموافق ……. / …….. /………
بعد أن تم الاتفاق بين كلًّ من :
1- السيد / ……….. المقيم ……….…. ( طرف أول - بائع )
2- السيد / ……….. المقيم ………. ( طرف ثان - مشترى )
بعد ان أقر الطرفان بأهليتهما للتعاقد والتصرفات القانونية ، اتفقا على هذا العقد بالشروط والأوصاف الأتية : اولاً: باع وأسقط وتنازل الطرف الأول إلى الطرف الثانى الشقة رقم (….. ) بالدور (……) من العقار رقم (….)بشارع (…………….)بلدية (……….) دائرة (………..) ولاية (……….)
وتبلغ مساحة هذه الشقة (……..)متراً مربعاً . وهذه الشقة عبارة عن (………..) غرف وصالة و (………….) و(……………)وهى تطل على(………..) وبابها ” يسار - يمين - أمام ” المصعد - السلم الطالع .
ثانياً : حدود الشقة :
الحد الشمالي: ……… بطول …….
. الحد الجنوبي ……….. بطول ……….
الحد الشرقى: ……….بطول ………..
الحد الغربى : ……….. بطول …………
ثالثاً : تم هذا البيع مقابل ثمن قدره ……… دينارا جزائريا .
رابعاً: يقر الطرف الثانى أنه عاين الشقة موضوع البيع المعاينة التامة النافية للجهالة شرعاً ،وأنه استلمها ووضع يده عليها بحالتها دون أن يحق له الرجوع على الطرف الأول بأى شىء بسبب ذلك ، كما يحق له التصرف فيها بكل الطرق القانونية واستغلالها ( إذا كان الثمن سدد بالكامل )، وأنه قد أصبح منذ التوقيع على هذا العقد مسئولاً عن سداد العوائد وجميع الأموال الأميرية وغيرها المقررة قانوناً على الشقة موضوع البيع .
خامساً : اتفق الطرفان على أن جميع مصروفات ورسوم وأتعاب التسجيل يتحملها الطرف الثانى المشترى ،كما يتعهد الطرف الأول بتقديم مستندات المليكة والرسومات الهندسية أو أية أوراق أخرى خاصة بالشقة موضوع البيع وذلك لإنهاء اجراءات التسجيل بالشهر العقارى .
سادساً : يتعهد الطرف الثانى المشترى باحترام جميع القواعد التى حددها القانون والخاصة بملكية الطبقات وعلى الأخص ما يأتى :
1- يتعهد المشترى بعدم إحداث أية تعديلات فى وحدته أو أى تعديل فى الأجزاء المشتركة بغير موافقة جميع الملاك بعد اعتماده من مهندس معتمد .
2- يتحمل الطرف الثانى( المشترى ) بنصيبه فى تكاليف حفظ الأجزاء المشتركة وصيانتها وادارتها وتجديدها
،3- ويكون نصيبه فى هذه التكاليف بنسبة قيمة حصة الشقة موضوع البيع فى الأجزاء المشتركة سالفة الذكر .
4- لا يحق للطرف الثانى المشترى أن يتخلى عن نصيبه فى الأجزاء المشتركة .
5- عدم اتخاذ أى إجراء يؤثر على المظهر العام للمبين
،6- سواء بتعديل لون طلاء الوجهات الخارجية أو المدخل أو السلالم
،7- مع مراعاة الحرص على مظهر المبنى الخارجى مع المحافظة التامة على سلامة المرافق.
8- عدم إقامة عشش للدواجن أو ما يشابه ذلك مما يضر بالصحة العامة .
9- على مالك كل شقة القيام بما يلزم من إصلاحات فى الجزء الخاص به إذا كان يترتب على عدم القيام بها ضرر لغيره من الملاك.
10- يحق لكل مالك وحدة فى المبنى اتخاذ الإجراءات القانونية كافة ضد الطرف الذى أخل بالشروط السابقة مع تحمله بجميع بالمصروفات كافة لإعادة الوضع إلى ما كان عليه .
سابعاً : كل نزاع ينشأ حول تفسير بند من بنود هذا العقد تكون محكمة ………. الابتدائية هى المختصة .
ثامناً : تحرر هذا العقد من صورتين بيد كل طرف صوره للعمل بها وقت اللزوم . ( الطرف الأول البائع ) ………………………….. ( الطرف الثانى المشترى )

sujets d'interpréation orale en cours

Max Payne

1) English: A New York cop's wife and baby are killed by thugs high on a designer drug called Volkyr. Devastated, the cop, maw Payne, joins the drug enforcement agency and goes undercover with the mob to find the source of the drug. Framed for the murder of his partner and hunted down by both the mob and the police, he is forced to wage a one-man war against crime.

Français: La femme et le bébé d’un flic New yorkais sont tués par des criminels sous l’emprise d’une drogue synthétique appelé Volkyr. Abattu, le flic, max Payne, se joint à la Drug Enforcement Agency (DEA) et s'infiltre dans la mafia de la drogue pour trouver sa source. Accusé à tort du meurtre de son partenaire et traqués par une foule et la police, il est obligé de mener une guerre solitaire contre le crime.

2) Français: MAX PAYNE (Marc Wahlberg) est un flic déterminé à retrouver ceux qui ont brutalement assassiné sa famille et son partenaire. Obsédé par sa quête de vengeance, il laisse son enquête l'entrainer dans un voyage cauchemardesque dans les bas-fonds de l'underground new-yorkais. Tandis que le mystère s'épaissit, Max va devoir affronter de puissants ennemis mais aussi ses propres démons.

English: MAX PAYNE (Mark Wahlberg) is a cop determined to find those who brutally murdered his family and his partner. Obsessed by his quest for revenge, the investigation took him into the nightmare travel through the bottom of the underground in New York. While the mystery thickens, Max will face powerful enemies and his own demons.

Voyage au centre de la terre/ Journey in the centre of the Earth

Français: L'histoire tourne autour d'un professeur de science dont les théories radicales ont complètement terni sa réputation. Alors qu'il retourne en Islande avec son neveu Sean, les deux explorateurs trouvent une grotte qui les mène dans les profondeurs de la Terre. Ils découvrent un fantastique, mais dangereux, monde perdu dans le centre de la planète. Là, ils découvrent alors de terrifiantes créatures.

English: The story is about a science professor whose radical theories have completely tarnished his reputation. So he returned to Iceland with his nephew Sean. The two explorers found a cave that leads into the depths of the Earth. They discover a fantastic, but dangerous, world lost in the centre of the planet. Here, they discover terrifying creatures.

Relative clause

It is important to distinguish between defining and non-defining relative clauses.

Defining relative clauses are an essential part of the meaning of a sentence and therefore they cannot be left out. They define exactly who or what we are talking about.
Ex: There’s the woman you where telling me about.

Non-defining relative clauses add extra information of secondary importance and can be left out of a sentence.
Ex: Mrs Hamouda, who was an extremely mean person while he was alive, has left all his money to a neighbour.

*Non-defining relative clauses are mainly found in written English, where sentence are carefully constructed. In spoken English, they sound rather normal and can easily be expressed by simple sentences.

Defining relative clauses

Here are the main forms used. The forms in brackets are possible but not as common.
Person thing
Subject Who (that) That (which)
Object --- (that) --- (that)

Notice that English has given the choice to put “that” or to omit it when the object of the clause id defined. It likes to drop it.

Ex: The doctor who helped me most was Dr. Brahmia (subject).
• The doctor I found most helpful was Dr. brahmia (object).
• The treatment I liked best was acupuncture (object).
• The treatment that helped me most was acupuncture (subject).

Notice that there are no commas before and after defining relative clauses when written and no pauses when spoken.
That is usually used after the following superlatives: all, every (thing), some (thing), any (thing), no (thing), and only.

Ex: he wrote some of the best poetry that’s ever been written.
All that’s needed is a little more time.
Don’t take anything that’s valuable.
The only thing that matters is that you are safe

• Prepositions can come either before relative pronouns or at the end of the relative clause. In spoken English, it is much more common to put the preposition at the end (and to drop the pronoun).

Ex: This is the book I was talking to you about.
The people I worked with are very kind.

A second relative introduction by and /or but usually takes a wh pronoun, not that.
Ex: Someone that I greatly admire, but who I’ve never met, is professor hellal.

Non-defining relative clauses

Here are the main forms used. The form in brackets is possible but not as common.
Person thing
Subject , who…, , which…,
Object , who…, (, whom…,) , which…,

Ex: Mr. Boudjedra, who has written several books, spoke at the meeting last night. (subject).
Ahmed Ouyahia, who Prime Minister, has become the leader of the RND Political party. (object).
My favourite dish is Couscous, which is the Algeria’s famous traditional dish. (subject).
I gave him a sandwich, which he ate greedily. (object).

Notice that unlike defining relative clauses, non-defining relative clauses are separated from their noun by commas. The pronoun can never be omitted in a non-defining relative clause. The construction is more common in written then in spoken English.

Seven Writing Myths

Here are seven non-rules imposed on writers that can be safely discarded:

(1) You must not start a sentence with ‘but’, ‘so’, ‘because’, ‘and’, and ‘however’.

(2) You must not put a comma before ‘and’. A comma before ‘and’ may, in fact, help the reader to see how the sentence is constructed, or put a pause exactly where you want it.

(3) You must not end a sentence with a preposition.

(4) You must not split your infinitives - If you think a sentence will be more emphatic, clear or rhythmical, split your infinitive – there is no reason in logic or grammar for avoiding it.

(5) You must not write a one-sentence paragraph. If you can say what you want to say in a single sentence that lacks a direct connection with any other sentence, just stop there and go on to a new paragraph; there’s no rule against it.

(6) You should write as you speak.

(7) You should test your writing with a readability formula.

Letter writing

In letters, avoid fusty first sentences and formula finishes.

Your first sentence should be clear, complete, concise, and written in modern English. Steer clear of these 3 traps.

(1) Avoid writing half a sentence instead of a full one – Your first sentence should be com-plete.

Compare:

1. Further to your letter of 3 February concerning the trustees of the P F Ali 1982 Settlement.
2. Further to your letter of 3 February concerning the trustees of the P F Ali 1982 Settlement, I am pleased to enclose the form you requested.

(2) Avoid repeating the heading – If your letter has a heading don’t keep referring to it.

Compare:

1.

Dear Ms Ammar

‘The Tree House’, 67 Benm’hidi Avenue, Poplar

I refer to your enquiry yesterday in relation to the above-mentioned property, and enclose details as requested.
2.

Dear Ms Ammar

‘The Tree House’, 67 Benm’hidi Avenue, Poplar

Thank you for your enquiry yesterday about this property; details are enclosed.

(3) Avoid such fusty phrases as:

* Our recent telephone discussion refers.
* Re your letter of the 10th, the contents of which have been noted.

Keep the finish simple, warm, and sincere:

Example:

* I look forward to receiving your application soon.
* I hope you will understand our position and I regret that we cannot help any further.

Understood words

Use words your readers are likely to understand

Seek out unusual words or phrases and replace them with plainer alternatives. For example, compare the officialese in the first statement with the clarity of the second.

1. In the event of your being evicted from your dwelling as a result of wilfully failing to pay your rent, the council may take the view that you have rendered yourself intentionally homeless and as such it would not be obliged to offer you alternative housing.
2. If you are evicted from your home because you deliberately fail to pay your rent, the council may decide that you have made yourself intentionally homeless. If this happens, the council does not need to offer you alternative permanent housing.

If you overuse the words in the left-hand column of the table, your writing could be perceived as pompous, officious, and long-winded.

Official Terms Plainer Alternatives
accordingly so
concerning about
due to the fact that as, because
for the purpose of to
interim (noun) meantime
nonetheless even so, however, yet
polemical controversial
supplementary extra, more
with regard to about, concerning

Keep sentences short

Over the whole document, make average sentence length 15 to 20 words. Muddle is more likely in a long sentence unless the construction is simple and well-organized. Learning to cut repetition and verbiage, using lists and headings properly, and shortening sentences can make the world of difference to your writing.

For example:

(1) Split and disconnect – Full stops enable readers to digest your latest point and prepare for the next.

Compare these two statements:

1. I understand that some doctors making night calls have been attacked in recent months on the expectation that they were carrying drugs and their caution when visiting certain areas in the south of the city has been very exacting and has even included telephoning the address to be visited from their car when they arrive outside the house.

2. I understand that some doctors making night calls have been attacked in recent months on the expectation that they were carrying drugs. Their caution when visiting certain areas in the south of the city has been very exacting. It has even included telephoning the address to be visited from their car when they arrive outside the house.

(2) Say less – Sometimes a sentence is lengthened by needless repetition.

Compare these two letters:

1. Dear Sirs

Trial of John Smith and James Jackson

Trade Descriptions Act 1968, Manchester Crown Court, 10.30 a.m.

Tuesday 7 June 2000

The above defendants are to be tried at Manchester Crown Court on Tuesday 7 June 2000 at 10.30 a.m. for several offences under the Trade Descriptions Act 1968 concerning the supply of motor vehicles to which false trade descriptions had been applied.

2. Dear Sirs

Trial of John Smith and James Jackson

Trade Descriptions Act 1968, Manchester Crown Court, 10.30 a.m.

Tuesday 7 June 2000

The above defendants are to be tried for several offences concerning the supply of motor vehicles to which false trade descriptions had been applied.